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Reflections on Time

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Well this photo is one of a few which came out of the old roll of Ilford SFX which i talked about in my journal.
I took this photo for the old SteelDolphin monthly theme back in the day, and i think it turned out ok. I like the 1950s look which the SFX has given it. Quite strange really.

Also the subject has become quite intreguing and personally salient in the last few days.

EDIT: The picture is really really dark, so please have a look at full view.
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:o (Eek)

nice one... you're right, it's really dark. I like the grain of the photo, though. has a very dark, weightly, moody feel to it.

the white bitsy at the bottom right... left... I don't know what to make of... balances against the top sky and keeps the eye from falling off the bottom, but it's distracting too... meh.

I'd just like to see a hair's more contrast on the reflection itself... just enough to make it stand out more without changing the mood of the image... (in photoshop, I guess).

can you put the title at the top, and see how that looks? the sky makes it very top-heavy as an image, and the text there might be better to reinforce that feeling...